This is a revised version by la_spice, the same title was also suggested by jackfrost. What do you think - is it better? I kinda think it is, though maybe I'd couple a few of the lines towards the end together. Thanks guys
(and I'll post something else soon, but I'm waiting on an email - as strange as that might sound).
Despair
Where did it all go wrong?
How does one grasp life? It’s so easy to let go, to let it slip away…
Lethargy
Pointlessness
No words…
A tiring, fading beat… a depressingly light melody… the dying passionate cry, and words spoken in secret.
Everyone is staring.
Nobody cares.
Tears are everywhere
All the faces are blank
Useless, all is useless
What is there?
Does any of it mean ANYTHING?
Loss.
Loneliness.
la_spice
Yes it solves the 'problem' and gives more impact - I hope you didn't mind me putting my oar in?